I have this plot based on a dream about hallways stretching for miles which connect abandoned rooms and also community bubbles.

In my head this was to have the feel of Larry Niven's "Destiny's Road". I've tried several attempts to write it but each one goes its own way 😛

The first attempt turned into a variation of A. Bertram Chandler's brilliant "Giant Killer" with the hallways being on a spaceship. But it didn't have the right feel in the end and I gave up on that path after writing a few chapters.

The second attempt feels a bit like "Silo" (Hugh Howey's "Wool") but goes off on its own direction (or so I feel).

I like this version better and am about halfway through, but it still misses the original feel I wanted.

Should I try a third iteration? Or keep going?

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